User:JackBauer24/Terrorthreats

This is the story I wrote based on 24. The sequel is coming soon and it will be much better than this one. Enjoy!

Terror Threats: Part 1

“Yeah, Uncle Jerry I was in North Korea. But I’d rather not talk about…” I said. Then my phone rang. “Hello?” I said. “Yes, Mr. Dial?” “Speaking” “Could you come down to the Counter Terrorist office please?” “Can I ask why?” “Sure but you won’t get an answer until you get here. See you in 5 minutes. Goodbye.” “Ok….” I called to my brother Steve, “Steve! I gotta go out for a second so you host the party for a while ok? “Sure thing bro!” I went outside and got in my car. I can’t possibly guess what they want. I’m sure to find out soon. I turned on the in car TV to look for news. On channel 738 I got something. “Our next story is coming straight from North Korean terrorist. They’ve sent a video stating that they plan to declare nuclear war in the next 3 months. The Counter Terrorist Team is working on finding who is behind this.” The reporter declared. I switched off the TV. This had something to do with our armies over there and the president. What had happened? I didn’t know but I wasn’t in the army anymore. I’m now a CTT advisor. My brother Steve is on of the top agents in CTT. He has done many things but I don’t know how we’ll handle this one. I finally got to CTT. “Good I’m glad you’re here.” Geoffrey said. “Yeah so what do you want?” I said back. “We dispatched Steve to North Korea.” “What?! Why?” I asked. “We sent him with to other agents from New York and Los Angeles. He’ll be fine.” “Even so, let me go to.” “No! It’s to dangerous” ‘Wait a minute! Steve was at my house 10 minutes ago. How’d he get away without me knowing?” “No one knows. Not even Captain John that we sent him with.” “What about Jennifer?” “She’s been sent too. Her job is to advise Steve.” “Why did you send her?” “Because she is our top advisor.” “Ok….so what am I doing here?” “You will NOT contact Steve by any means. However, you will advise Will Williams from New York.” “Ok. I got it.” I then went inside CTT. I got to my cubicle and set up a network connection to North Korea. I found a CTT signal. Three of them labeled: S1, W2, and B3. I was tempted to hit S1 but selected W2. He come on the speaker. “Hello?” he said. “Yes is this Agent Will Williams?” “Yes…uh is this important?” “I’m Agent Clay Dial, Steve’s brother. I’m here to advise you.” “Ok…I thought Jennifer was our advisor.” “She is but I’m supposed to help out from here. Can you give me a connection to Steve?” “Um can’t you do it from there?” “Yeah but I’m not supposed to. Could you give him your headset? “Uh sure. Hold on.” I waited for about a minute. “Clay? What are you doing?” Steve said. “I’m not supposed to talk to but I had to.” I answered him. “Ok…..” “Listen, I’m going to help you” “Clay, what are you…Clay?” “Ok, done. Don’t worry about it Steve. It’s all taken care of.” “Clay, I don’t know what you did but thank you” “Alright, I gotta go. See you when you get back” I said and cut the transmission. I went back to Will. He seemed to be doing fine so I left CTT. I went out to my car to find CTT security guarding it. I went up to them. “What’s going on?” I asked urgently. “Sorry Sir but you’re on lockdown,” one of them said. “Who authorized this order?” “I did!” another voice said. I turned around to see head of CTT, Geoffrey, standing there. “Geoffrey! What’s going on?” I asked him. “You’re on lockdown. No one is allowed to leave CTT at the moment.” He said. “Why?” “Because,” he got closer to whisper in my ear, “There are terrorists surrounding the building. There’s a bomb inside. They demanded that you not leave. We put everyone on lockdown to make it look like a normal procedure.” “What’s your plan?” “Plan?” “Yeah, how are we going to dissolve their threat?” “It’s up to you. Think about it. You are the only one they want.” “Ok. I got it. Can you get shooters?” “I’ll try. Until then, you need to figure out a plan to negotiate with them.” “We don’t negotiate with terrorists” “WE don’t but you can,” he said as he turned to go back in. I followed him. I could feel their crosshairs against my head. It was a scary feeling. I got back to my work station. I decided that I should buy time first so I could find the bomb and defuse it. Once that was done, I could try to engage the terrorists. As long as I don’t leave we should be okay. I didn’t know how much time I had but I set out to find and defuse the bomb. I walked around to the other side of the building. I looked for our bomb specialist, Karen. “Karen! I need to talk to you,” I said. “Sure Clay, what is it?” She replied. “Are you aware of the situation?” I said. She looked around for a second then answered me. “Yeah, I’m in on it” “Good. Now, where would you hide a bomb?” “The most uncommon places you can think of such as, bathrooms, ceilings, fans, sinks…you know places where people wouldn’t see” “Ok thanks. I gotta find that bomb before they detonate it,” I looked at Karen. I met here when I first joined the army and now here we are at CTT together. We had once been in a relationship and I think both of us have clinged to it. I walked away. She stood there watching me go. I knew that feeling. I went to the bathrooms first. I checked under sinks, toilets, anything I could think of. I found nothing. The terrorists could have only been here a short time so I figured they would have to put it in the ceiling or roof. There was a dilemma. If I went out on the roof they would suspect something was up and bomb the place anyway. There was nothing I could do. We had to get out. All of us had to leave. How could that happen? Just then I heard a thump and then gunfire. They had noticed something, but how? They couldn’t have seen anything unless…unless they had a scout inside CTT. People were scrambling everywhere. I drew my weapon. It was my old Beretta 9mm. I moved closer to the attack scene. Terrorists were moving in CTT. I moved around the corner and fired. I killed two. The other 5 were spraying the wall with gunfire. I took cover and other agents were already firing away. I fired at them again, killing another. More were coming in. I had almost forgot about the bomb when Karen rushed to me. “Clay! The bomb!” she yelled at me. I only nodded. I told the other agents to hold their fire. The terrorists did the same although I didn’t know why. They could have killed us all then. “We want Clay Dial!” an Arabian voice said. “Ok! I’m here!” I said back. “Come with us!” “Ok…but you must leave the agency alone!” Karen got close to me. “What are you doing?” she whispered. “Finishing this raid,” I said as I reloaded my Beretta. I turned the corner firing. I killed two more, making the others jump. They thought that they had won. I dove for the AK49. The agents killed the other three men. I took cover behind the door. No more shots were fired. They were setting the bomb! “Go! Get everyone out!” I shouted. Karen nodded. Two and a half minutes later the building blew up. I had barely gotten 45 feet away. Debris was flying all around me. I fell to the ground. I waited for what seemed like forever. I finally stood. I was alive, if only barely. The place was deserted. Everyone had gotten out. I rushed to my car. “Good thing I parked far away today,” I muttered to my self. I turned on the TV as I drove off. “The terrorists have declared war on America today following the bombing of the Atlanta CTT. The non-cooperation of Clay Dial and the rest of CTT has fueled the fire of terrorism.” The reporter stated. I switch off the TV. Another war had started. War on Terrorism 2 was what they would call it for the moment. I sighed. “Well Clay, you’ve done it again. Good job old chum! Too bad it wasn’t entirely your fault! That’s what you were aiming for right?” I said to myself angrily. I shrugged. I would be fighting anyway. I would fight to right what I had wronged.